A couple weeks ago I did my first public talk on the the topic of Entrepreneurial Authorship, a guide on and writing and indie publishing.
I broke it down into three sections:
1) writing - the creative brain
2) editing - the critical brain
3) publishing - the business brain
I have it all laid out in a pretty Power Point presentation, which has been saved as a PDF. Click on the link if you want to see it.
They chose this night to dig the sidewalk up outside. I used it as an example of an exterior antagonist. =)
I was pretty nervous (my inner antagonist) but it went well.
I'm author ELLE STRAUSS and welcome to my website!
I write fun, lower Young Adult (teen) fiction to do with whimsical things like time-travel, fairies and merfolk.
When my serious side peeks out, she's called LEE STRAUSS. She likes to write upper YA about real things that have happened in the past, or made up things that could quite possibly happen in the future.
This blog is about books, mine and other fab authors', but occasionally I'll share about other topics.
Thanks for dropping by!
Wednesday, May 30, 2012
Tuesday, May 29, 2012
To Ride a Puca by Heather McCorkle Blog tour
Invaders are coming to take what isn't theirs, again.
Neala wants to stand and fight for her homeland, but as one of the last druids, she may be standing alone.
Persecuted, hunted down, forced to live in obscurity, the druids have all but given up. Can the determination of a girl who has barely come into her power bring them together? Or, just when she finally finds her place among her kind, will they end up losing a homeland their very magic is tied to?
Available in eBook and hardback at B&N, Amazon, and other retail sites.
Disclaimer: This novel contains some violence and difficult subject matter. It is recommended for mature YA and up.
I’ll be giving away great prizes, a new one, every week for the next three weeks. This week I’m giving away a signed paperback of TANGLED TIDES by Karen Amanda Hooper. It is about a girl who finds herself tangled up in the underwater world of mysterious merfolk and secretive selkies. It is one of my favorite books of the year so far, trust me you’ll love it! The contest will be open until June 3rd, the winner to be announced on the 4th.
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Monday, May 28, 2012
Monday Musings
1. Happy Memorial Day to all my American friends. In Canada our May long weekend was last week, known as Queen Victoria Day where we celebrate the Queen's birthday. In case you were wondering.
2. CLOCKWISE is FREE! On Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/CLOCKWISE-book-one-Clockwise-ebook/dp/B005WOFX4M
If you have a Kobo or an iPad, iPod, iphone, CLOCKWISE is FREE for you,too. If you haven't read it yet, what are you waiting for? (also free on Smashwords) :=)
3. It's a time of transition for our family. The oldest graduated from University recently and the youngest is about to graduate from High School. The middle two left home, the third one for the first time. We had one day we were all home together for family photos and of course it had to rain. We actually got a great shot because of it.
4. I sent SEAWEED off to one of my editors on Saturday! It's a fun
merfolk book and I really enjoyed writing (and re-writing...) it. Yay,
now just got to get working on a cover.
5. Now that I'm finished with the Clockwise Series (Clocked to be released soon) I'm deciding what to work on next. Playing with Matches is still on the sidelines. It needs editing but I'm not sure if I'm ready to delve into this daunting task or not. I'm hoping to get to Nuremberg and Passau (the two cities the story is set in) this fall.
What I'm really itching to get back to is my science fiction/dystopian ms, tentatively called Perception. I wrote it alternating between two POVs, but now I'm thinking that book one should be in the girl's POV only, and then book two in the guy's.
So many decisions!
How about you? How was your weekend? What are you working on now?
2. CLOCKWISE is FREE! On Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/CLOCKWISE-book-one-Clockwise-ebook/dp/B005WOFX4M
If you have a Kobo or an iPad, iPod, iphone, CLOCKWISE is FREE for you,too. If you haven't read it yet, what are you waiting for? (also free on Smashwords) :=)
3. It's a time of transition for our family. The oldest graduated from University recently and the youngest is about to graduate from High School. The middle two left home, the third one for the first time. We had one day we were all home together for family photos and of course it had to rain. We actually got a great shot because of it.
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5. Now that I'm finished with the Clockwise Series (Clocked to be released soon) I'm deciding what to work on next. Playing with Matches is still on the sidelines. It needs editing but I'm not sure if I'm ready to delve into this daunting task or not. I'm hoping to get to Nuremberg and Passau (the two cities the story is set in) this fall.
What I'm really itching to get back to is my science fiction/dystopian ms, tentatively called Perception. I wrote it alternating between two POVs, but now I'm thinking that book one should be in the girl's POV only, and then book two in the guy's.
So many decisions!
How about you? How was your weekend? What are you working on now?
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Friday, May 25, 2012
And The Winners Are.....
Thanks to everyone who participated in the Indelibles Summer Beach Bash Blog Hop!!
Raffelcopter randomly chose our winners.
The Grand Prize winner of a kindle or nook loaded with books is Heidi from The Readiacs. Congratulations, Heidi!!
The five winners of my novelette CLOCKED are:
April Avery
Justine Valdiva
Rachel Vessar
JC Spelbring
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As soon as Clocked is released, I will send you all the Smashwords code by email.
Congratulations! And thanks for doing the hop!!
Raffelcopter randomly chose our winners.
The Grand Prize winner of a kindle or nook loaded with books is Heidi from The Readiacs. Congratulations, Heidi!!
The five winners of my novelette CLOCKED are:
April Avery
Justine Valdiva
Rachel Vessar
JC Spelbring
Books4me
As soon as Clocked is released, I will send you all the Smashwords code by email.
Congratulations! And thanks for doing the hop!!
Wednesday, May 23, 2012
Closed Hearts by Susan Kaye Quinn, book 2 in the Mindjack Trilogy is here!
Announcing the release of Closed Hearts, the sequel to Open Minds by Susan Kaye Quinn.
Book Two of the Mindjack Trilogy
When you control minds, only your heart can be used against you.
Eight months ago, Kira Moore revealed to the mindreading world that mindjackers like herself were hidden in their midst. Now she wonders if telling the truth was the right choice after all. As wild rumors spread, a powerful anti-jacker politician capitalizes on mindreaders’ fears and strips jackers of their rights. While some jackers flee to Jackertown—a slum rife with jackworkers who trade mind control favors for cash—Kira and her family hide from the readers who fear her and jackers who hate her. But when a jacker Clan member makes Kira’s boyfriend Raf collapse in her arms, Kira is forced to save the people she loves by facing the thing she fears most: FBI agent Kestrel and his experimental torture chamber for jackers.
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Monday, May 21, 2012
Summer Reading Beach Bash--win a Kindle or Nook!
The SUN is shining! Summer is here! And the Indelibles have what you need for great beach and poolside reading in the SUN! Are you ready?
We are giving away the winner's choice of KINDLE
or NOOK along with 16 recently released indelibles books, including my latest, fun to read in the SUN release, Like Clockwork, the companion novel to my Clockwise series.
Adeline Savoy had hoped that the move west from Cambridge to
Hollywood with her single dad would mean they’d finally bond like a real
family, but all she got was a father too busy with his new female friends and
his passion for acting to really see her.
Instead she finds herself getting attached to Faye, the
divorcee hair dresser she befriends when she travels back in time to 1955. Plus
Faye has a hottie, James Dean-esque, bad-boy brother who has Adeline’s heart
all aflutter. But bad boys from the past
can be dangerous.
Is it possible that Adeline really does belong in her own
time and that maybe the right boy lives as close as next door?
Enter to Win
1. Visit the Indelibles Website between May 21st-May24th
2. Follow the chain of links to each of the blogs on the hop
3. Collect the SECRET word from each blog (hint, look here for all caps)
4. Submit the secret sentence for your chance to win
5. Winner announced on the Indelible blog May 25.
Plus, I am giving away 5 copies of my brand new novelette, CLOCKED!
5. Winner announced on the Indelible blog May 25.
Plus, I am giving away 5 copies of my brand new novelette, CLOCKED!
Written from Nate Mackenzie's point of view, this new companion novelette to the Clockwise series is a much expanded version of the short story found in
the In His Eyes Anthology (from 3k to 15k). Ever wonder how Nate got talked
into asking Casey to dance on a dare? And what it felt like for him to
experience 1860? How he really felt about Casey Donovan? Now you can
know!!
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Friday, May 18, 2012
Friday Four or Five - and the query critiques
1. Next week is BEACH BASH with the Indelibles. Those of us with spring/summer releases have banded together for a fun blog hop where you could win your choice of a KINDLE or NOOK loaded with our new books! Plus, each blog stop is offering their own prize. This starts Monday. Make sure you check back--you don't want to miss this!!
2. Yesterday I revealed LIKE CLOCKWORK, the companion novel to my Clockwise series. Yes, you guessed it, Like Clockwork is my spring release and is part of the upcoming Beach Bash. Plus, I will be giving away e-copies of CLOCKED a brand new companion novelette to the Clockwise series featuring Nate Mackenzie. This is a much expanded version of the short story found in the In His Eyes Anthology (3k to 14k). Ever wonder how Nate got talked into asking Casey to dance on a dare? And what it felt like for him to experience 1860? How he really felt about Casey Donovan? Now you can know!!
3. Something not writing related: My daughter's grad banquet and dance is this weekend. This is kid #4 and my final high school graduate. I still haven't met her date! Perhaps there will be pictures to come.
4. I meant to get to this sooner, but I double booked my blog schedule this week. So here are the two brave souls who posted their queries in the comments for a critique based on my four point plan.
Lost memory and a ring given to Julian in his dream sets off a journey that Julian didn't anticipate to ever take. Everything that he thought about his life was just an existence, His parents are not his parents and his best friend Garth is his guardian. He finds out what he really is and where he is really from. This is the who it’s about paragraph. You should be able to distil it down to one or two lines. I think you’re trying to say too much here.
There is also another half to Julian and her name is Ebony. She saved him in an attack back home. She wears a matching ring just like his. Together these rings are powerful. Even though he has no memory of her he feels compelled to save her from the prison she's being held in. the circumstance. I would try to capsulate this more. Ie: Ebony wears a matching ring. Though she once saved his life, Julian doesn’t remember her. Still, he’s compelled to rescue her from her prison cell. --something like that. He has many obstacles to overcome and one is by the name of Kellan, a rogue who has made it clear he plans on killing Julian for his ring.
War is looming back home and time is running out as now others who have heard that Julian lives are now making him the hunt.
There is a new girl at school, Anya. She is one of them and claims she can help them. She says she knows Kellan. At first they're not sure but she proves herself and sets out to help Julian reclain who he was. The previous sentences should make up your conflict paragraph. Pick the main conflict not the subplot conflicts. What they both don't know is that is playing a deadly game of her own. This is the hook sentence. Work to make is shine so that it can stand on its own, like a log line.
My
diagnosis. Still needs work in determining what information belongs in each
section, and on polishing up the wording.
Seventeen-year-old immortal Mylo Chance doesn’t see the point in building relationships, especially with girls. Who it’s about. It isn’t because he’s part of the Soulettey race–emotionless, soulless beings created to balance the error of human judgment. That would be too simple of an explanation.
Relationships are impractical because Mylo is Broken. Circumstance.
Being Broken means the impossible follows no schedule.awkward. I don’t understand this sentence. No matter where Mylo is or what he’s doing, uninvited souls slam into his chest and reek havoc on his humanity, torturing him with their dying moments. To escape, Mylo must become a white Arctic fox–the only animal Soulettey in existence. In this form he can transfer the souls and store them in animal hosts called the Inhabited.
Feeling alienated from his own race for centuries, Mylo has had plenty of time to question his existence. That list doubles when he meets the highly likable and entertaining Ellary, a human girl he just can’t seem to say no to. But it isn’t until several Soulettey men ask Mylo if he’s seen a white fox lurking in the woods, that he suspects there’s more to being a Broken than creating Inhabited. These two paragraphs contain your conflict.
Keeping his Soulettey identity a secret, Mylo and Ellary track down the men, hoping to find answers. Instead, Mylo learns about two conflicting legends pertaining to his existence and the well-being of the Soulettey species. But which story is true and who is Mylo’s real enemy?
An emotionally riddled Mylo encounters tragic loss, unforgettable kinships, heartbreak, and vicious enemies in his quest to uncover the truth behind his creation and prevent a war that could terminate his entire race. I’d distill these two remaining paragraphs into one or two sentences that contain the hook.
My
diagnosises: Getting close. Try to avoid saying too much. Get to the punchline
in the hook paragraph sooner.
Have a great weekend!
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Thursday, May 17, 2012
Announcing LIKE CLOCKWORK!
Like Clockwork, a companion novel to the Clockwise series, is here!!
Adeline doesn't feel she belongs in her own time, but can bad boys from the past be trusted?
Adeline Savoy had hoped that the move west from Cambridge to Hollywood with her single dad would mean they’d finally bond like a real family, but all she got was a father too busy with his new female friends and his passion for acting to really see her.
Instead she finds herself getting attached to Faye, the divorcee hair dresser she befriends when she travels back in time to 1955. Plus Faye has a hottie, James Dean-esque, bad-boy brother who has Adeline’s heart all aflutter. But bad boys from the past can be dangerous. Is it possible that Adeline really does belong in her own time and that maybe the right boy lives as close as next door?
LIKE CLOCKWORK is available now at Amazon and Smashwords and soon for B&N, ibooks and other e-book retailers.
Read on to sample the first chapter:
Adeline doesn't feel she belongs in her own time, but can bad boys from the past be trusted?
Adeline Savoy had hoped that the move west from Cambridge to Hollywood with her single dad would mean they’d finally bond like a real family, but all she got was a father too busy with his new female friends and his passion for acting to really see her.
Instead she finds herself getting attached to Faye, the divorcee hair dresser she befriends when she travels back in time to 1955. Plus Faye has a hottie, James Dean-esque, bad-boy brother who has Adeline’s heart all aflutter. But bad boys from the past can be dangerous. Is it possible that Adeline really does belong in her own time and that maybe the right boy lives as close as next door?
LIKE CLOCKWORK is available now at Amazon and Smashwords and soon for B&N, ibooks and other e-book retailers.
Read on to sample the first chapter:
Chapter One
Adeline Savoy
My dad still thought I was ten. That was how old I was when my
mother died, and how old I was when my father crawled into his “cave,” also
known as his office on the 26th floor of the John Hancock tower. Six years
later, like a bear coming out of hibernation, Dad decided his days of hiding
behind a desk were over. I thought he was going through a mid-life crisis,
which was why we now lived in Hollywood instead of Cambridge. And why when I
spotted his reflection in a mirror at the cosmetic counter in the Shop &
Save store, I almost dropped the Scarlet
Passion lipstick tester I'd just smeared on my lips.
Even though I was sixteen, I wasn't allowed to wear make-up.
True. With my left hand I used a tissue to wipe the evidence off my mouth, all
the while watching my dad’s familiar profile move in and out of range in the
mirror.
He was laughing. I crouched down and turned, my vision just
missing the counter top, and watched. His hair had grown out since the
“decision.” He used to always keep it so short, that I didn’t even know it was
wavy before, and the lines on his face never used to turn upward in a smile.
I had to see who was causing this cosmic reaction in my father.
The clerk who sold cheap jewelry, a pretty-in-a-fake way brunette, tilted her
head and giggled back.
My jaw dropped and something really strange started happening
in my stomach. I felt a little sick because I couldn’t believe what I was
witnessing. My dad was flirting!
Who was this man dressed in khakis, flip-flops and an un-tucked
pseudo Hawaiian shirt? My real dad only wore pinstriped suits with starchy
white shirts and a blue tie. Always. Even to bed, I was certain.
“Miss? Are you all right?” The cosmetic clerk was armed with a
spray nozzle cleaner in one hand and a paper towel in the other.
I mimed as best I could, “ssh”, but apparently dad was the only
one with acting skills in my family, since she wouldn’t leave me alone.
“Miss? You don’t look too good. Should I call for medical?”
The fake pretty lady stopped chatting when she heard her
colleague talking so loudly. Obviously, that meant my dad’s little flirtation
episode was over. And of course, my blonde ponytail was a giveaway.
“Adeline?”
he said.
“Dad!” I jumped up, feigning surprise.
“What are you doing here?” he asked.
What are you doing here?
I thought. “Um nothing, just looking. Thought I might buy some gum.”
Dad glanced back at the fake and I did a quick switcheroo,
replacing the tester and grabbing a sealed golden tube. It tucked nicely in my
fist as I crossed my arms over my chest.
“Adeline, come here,” Dad said. “I want you to meet someone.”
My legs moved toward dad and the fake without my permission.
“Adeline, this is my friend from acting class, Spring. Spring,
this is my daughter, Adeline.”
Spring extended her hand. Unfortunately, the contraband
lipstick was in my right hand. I wasn’t a magician. Dad would notice if I tried
to switch. I opted for the awkward offering of my left hand.
“It’s so nice to meet you,” Spring gushed.
“Same,” I said, not meaning it at all. “Not that I don’t want
to stay and chat,” I added quickly, before Dad could draw us into more forced
intimacies, “but I’ve got to go.”
“I’ll walk with you,” Dad said. But he wasn’t looking at me; he
was smiling at the fake.
“It’s okay, Dad. I’ll meet you at home.” I strutted across the
floor to the cashier. He glanced back at me as I stood in line at the register.
I waved the pack of gum in the air. I paid for it and the lipstick while Dad
and the fake went back to making googly eyes.
I snapped the gum in my mouth while caressing the lipstick tube
in my hand. It was encased in a plastic protective seal, a perforated strip
running the length of it like a zipper. My thumb picked at the rim. All I had
to do was rip it open and it would no longer be returnable.
But I really should return it. I’d promised myself I’d give up
the greasy lip habit when we moved. It was a chance to start over, do
everything new, and be a proper daughter with a proper father.
Hrumph. Like that was
turning out. Dad wasn't exactly holding up his end of the bargain.
My breaths came out short and rapid, like a panting dog. I
didn’t realize how fast I’d been walking. I’d hardly taken in the tall palm
trees that lined the road or the sweet smell of tropical flowers I didn’t know
the names of.
No signs of autumn in sight. In Cambridge the leaves would be
showing signs of turning color, bright reds and yellows. A little twist in my
stomach. I was homesick.
And angry.
He was supposed to change, but not like that. He was supposed
to notice me, spend time with me, not some flake called Spring. What kind of
name was that anyway? It sounded like a made up actress name. Her last name was
probably Storm or Wind. My thumb picked the plastic a bit more.
“Hi, there.”
I turned my head. Some guy riding a pink bike with a sparkly
white banana seat and matching tassels that hung off tall, wide handle bars
slowed down to keep pace with me.
“Hi,” he said again. This time there was no mistaking he was
talking to me.
“Hi?” I said, not slowing down at all to do so. I may be
entering my junior year, but I still didn’t talk to strangers. Janice, my
babysitter/pseudo mom in Cambridge, had drilled that lesson into me good.
“My name's Marco. I live next door to you.”
Okay. I slowed a little. “Why are you riding a girl’s bike?”
Did he steal it? Why didn’t he care about how stupid it made him look?
“It’s my sister’s. I sold mine to buy something else, but
riding this is better than walking.”
“I’m walking and you’re not making any better time than me.” I
was annoyed. Why didn’t he just keep going? I preferred to sulk alone.
“You’re new, so I thought with school starting tomorrow, you’d
like someone to ride the bus with.”
Good point. Who knew what kinds of Hollywood weirdos would be
on the bus? I looked Marco up and down. He was average height, shaggy hair, and
wore a graphic t-shirt and surfer shorts with fat, loosely tied skate shoes on
his feet. No socks. He had nice, tanned skin and warm brown eyes that squinted
to almost close when he smiled. He wasn’t hard to look at.
And he looked trustworthy enough, I guessed. Plus, he was right.
I didn’t really want to go to Hollywood High alone.
I stopped and turned to him. “I’m Adeline Savoy.” I wiped the
sweat on my right hand off on my skirt—sky blue, slightly flared and to my
knees—and offered it wanting to start my new friendship off on the right foot.
“Cool,” Marco said as we shook. “You like to make things
official. I like that.”
The sun must’ve glinted off the gold tube in my other hand
because Marco nodded toward it. “What’ya got there?”
“Oh, it’s just lipstick. I bought it, but now I’m not sure. I
might take it back.”
“I don’t know why girls wear that vile stuff,” he said. I was
surprised by the strength of his statement.
“It makes us feel good. Pretty. What’s wrong with that?”
“For one thing, you’re already pretty without it.”
He thought I was pretty?
“Besides,” he continued, “it’s made out of horse urine.”
“It is not! That’s so gross.”
“It is. That’s why it has that sticky consistency. Have you
ever seen dried urine around a toilet?”
“You’re disgusting! How would you know about lipstick, anyway?”
“I have three sisters, though one is only six years old and
hasn’t discovered the evils of make-up and this culture’s drive to sexualize
young girls. It’s too late for my older sisters, but you can still be saved.”
Who was this guy? And how did he get off talking to me like
that? He didn’t even know me. I felt my lips settle into a tight line and my pace picked up.
“Hey, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to offend you.”
How long was he going to walk with me? “Where did you say you
lived?”
“Right next door to you.”
“Right next door?” This annoying person, who happened to be my
only friend, lived right next door?
“Yeah, the two storey. My bedroom window faces yours.”
“You see in my window!”
“No. I don’t…” His face flushed red.
“You do, you do look
in. You peeping Tom!”
“Adeline, I didn’t see anything. I just heard your music.”
“Huh?” I stopped and spun to face him.
A grin tugged at the corners of his mouth. “And your singing.”
“What?” I was mortified. He probably heard me singing along to Feist, or even worse, he saw me doing my
Michael Jackson impersonation. I bet he saw me doing the Thriller dance the other night. Ugh!
“Everyone can hear you. You have your window open.”
“You know what? Don’t talk to me.”
Marco seemed truly taken aback, and yet he didn’t get the hint.
Not even one as direct as that. He was not only a peeper, but he was dense,
too.
“I live in a house full of women. Three sisters and a mother. I
get what’s going on here. It’s PMS, isn’t it?”
Was he kidding me? As
if I would talk about something like that with him! I stopped and stared hard
into his eyes. I produced my new tube of lipstick and slowly peeled the
perforated strip, letting the plastic wrapper drop to the ground. I
dramatically popped off the lid and twisted the base until the bright red dried
horse urine was in full view.
Then I put it on my lips, slowly, purposefully, first the top
and then the bottom, smacking them in Marco’s direction when I was done.
Take that, Mr. I Know Women.
Marco bent down, picked up the plastic wrapper and pushed it in
his pocket. He straddled the bike and pushed off, turning back long enough to
say, “I’ll pick you up at 8:10 tomorrow morning for school.”
Argh.
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Wednesday, May 16, 2012
DRIVEN by Lisa Nowak!
There are a lot of great new book releases this week and Lisa Nowak has added DRIVEN to the list! Her books are not only exciting but full of heart and terrifically relatable characters. You don't want to miss out on this series!
The last thing on 16-year-old Jess DeLand’s wish list is a boyfriend. She’d have to be crazy to think any guy would look twice at her. Besides, there are more important things to hope for, like a job working on cars and an end to her mom’s drinking. Foster care is a constant threat, and Jess is willing to sacrifice anything to stay out of the system. When luck hands her the chance to work on a race car, she finds herself rushing full throttle into a world of opportunities—including a boy who doesn’t mind the grease under her fingernails. The question is, can a girl who keeps herself locked up tighter than Richard Petty’s racing secrets open up enough to risk friendship and her first romance?
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“The first romance is captured beautifully—just the right combination of natural and awkward, of eager and scared.”
~ Bob Martin, writing professor, Pacific Northwest College of Art
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In addition to being a YA author, Lisa Nowak is a retired amateur stock car racer, an accomplished cat whisperer, and a professional smartass. She writes coming-of-age books about kids in hard luck situations who learn to appreciate their own value after finding mentors who love them for who they are. She enjoys dark chocolate and stout beer and constantly works toward employing wei wu wei in her life, all the while realizing that the struggle itself is an oxymoron.
Lisa has no spare time, but if she did she’d use it to tend to her expansive perennial garden, watch medical dramas, take long walks after dark, and teach her cats to play poker. For those of you who might be wondering, she is not, and has never been, a diaper-wearing astronaut. She lives in Milwaukie, Oregon, with her husband, four feline companions, and two giant sequoias.
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Tuesday, May 15, 2012
How To Break Up with an Alien by Magan Vernon
The Highly anticipated second book in The My Alien Romance series is here!
Face it, long distance relationships in high school are hard, especially when the other one in the relationship is an alien. Alex Bianchi may have survived an intergalactic battle, but that still doesn't excuse her from her senior year of high school, or qualify her for any sort of scholarship. To make up for college tuition costs, she takes a job at a local coffee shop. If only coffee could solve all of her problems. As Alex's senior year progresses, everything changes and she can't figure out if it is interstellar or if it is just time to break up with an alien.
It is available now on Amazon and Smashwords.
It is available now on Amazon and Smashwords.
Check out the series that Lydia Kang, author of The Fountain, calls
A tiny bit Twilight, A tiny bit Men in Black, and a whole lot of fun!
For a limited time the first book in the series, How to Date an Alien is only 99 cents for the Ebook. The #1 Alien Romance on Goodreads!
Get it to day at Amazon, Barnes & Noble, & Smashwords.
Stay tuned for more details and a giveaway coming up with The Indelibles!
Stay tuned for more details and a giveaway coming up with The Indelibles!
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You can find her online at www.maganvernon.com
Monday, May 14, 2012
Those Beautiful, Horrible Beginnings-The First Sentence
The posts I've done on the craft of writing lately have been getting a lot of interest, so I thought I'd re-post some of my writing tips, maybe once a week until I run out :)
Where I do I start, I ask you, where do I start???
If you’re like me, you’ve jumped around from starting position to starting position, pulling your hair out as you go. If you’re not like me, well, lucky you.
Beginnings are so difficult for me, I almost feel like apologizing that I’m trying to instruct on how to write them at all. The most I can hope for is that you will learn from my mistakes.
But you have to start somewhere. So pick a spot and start. It’s only by trying it on for size that you’ll be able to tell if it fits.
And I can tell you this: you’re probably going to re-write your beginning many times, so don’t get too hung up on it at first. Just write it and move on.
But, for the purpose of the following instruction, let’s assume that you are at revision stage and want to nail that beginning sequence.
Let’s start with the first sentence.
What does a great first sentence look like? Let’s look at a few from the assortment of books I happen to currently have in my possession.
THE CAY by Theodore Taylor: Like silent, hungry sharks that swim in the darkness of the sea, the German submarines arrived in the middle of the night.
GOING BOVINE by Libba Bray: The best day of my life happened when I was five and almost died at Disney World.
MATCHED by Ally Condle: Now that I found the way to fly, which direction should I go into the night.
BEFORE I FALL by Lauren Oliver: They say that just before you die your whole life flashes before your eyes, but that’s not how it happened for me.
And possibly the all time best first sentence ev-ah, PRIDE AND PREJUDICE by Jane Austin: It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.
Take a look at your own first sentence. If that’s all you had to go on, not the strength of the next sentence or paragraph, just the sentence itself, how would it strike you? Is it a strong sentence? Does it make you want to go, what comes next?
Here are a few of my first sentences.Some are keepers, and some are subject to change, but they're what I'm working with for now.
The pillar of smoke rising on the horizon could only mean one thing: a farm, which meant food.
Everyone has to live with something.
Helena’s father had cautioned her against wandering alone outside the perimeter of their villa, as mingling with the family’s slave and servant children was not allowed.
Zoe Vanderveen tried to focus on her summer reading physics text but her eyes kept lifting away from her glass electronic reader to the dark haired boy across the room.
He stood at the bonfire with his head high, shoulders back, radiating a military type of confidence.
And let me share one more. This is from my son, many years ago when he was six:
In the beginning it was very exciting and in the end it was even worse.
(Pretty much wraps up the writing life, doesn’t it? :D)
Why is this important? Because opening lines hook us into reading the second line. And hopefully more. I know when I’m browsing for a book, this is what I do—I read the first sentence. And then the first paragraph. I may read the whole first page, but not likely. If the first sentence and paragraph don’t grab me, I shelve the book and choose another.
How many pages do you give a book before you put it down?
Where I do I start, I ask you, where do I start???
If you’re like me, you’ve jumped around from starting position to starting position, pulling your hair out as you go. If you’re not like me, well, lucky you.
Beginnings are so difficult for me, I almost feel like apologizing that I’m trying to instruct on how to write them at all. The most I can hope for is that you will learn from my mistakes.
But you have to start somewhere. So pick a spot and start. It’s only by trying it on for size that you’ll be able to tell if it fits.
And I can tell you this: you’re probably going to re-write your beginning many times, so don’t get too hung up on it at first. Just write it and move on.
But, for the purpose of the following instruction, let’s assume that you are at revision stage and want to nail that beginning sequence.
Let’s start with the first sentence.
What does a great first sentence look like? Let’s look at a few from the assortment of books I happen to currently have in my possession.
THE CAY by Theodore Taylor: Like silent, hungry sharks that swim in the darkness of the sea, the German submarines arrived in the middle of the night.
GOING BOVINE by Libba Bray: The best day of my life happened when I was five and almost died at Disney World.
MATCHED by Ally Condle: Now that I found the way to fly, which direction should I go into the night.
BEFORE I FALL by Lauren Oliver: They say that just before you die your whole life flashes before your eyes, but that’s not how it happened for me.
And possibly the all time best first sentence ev-ah, PRIDE AND PREJUDICE by Jane Austin: It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.
Take a look at your own first sentence. If that’s all you had to go on, not the strength of the next sentence or paragraph, just the sentence itself, how would it strike you? Is it a strong sentence? Does it make you want to go, what comes next?
Here are a few of my first sentences.Some are keepers, and some are subject to change, but they're what I'm working with for now.
The pillar of smoke rising on the horizon could only mean one thing: a farm, which meant food.
Everyone has to live with something.
Helena’s father had cautioned her against wandering alone outside the perimeter of their villa, as mingling with the family’s slave and servant children was not allowed.
Zoe Vanderveen tried to focus on her summer reading physics text but her eyes kept lifting away from her glass electronic reader to the dark haired boy across the room.
He stood at the bonfire with his head high, shoulders back, radiating a military type of confidence.
And let me share one more. This is from my son, many years ago when he was six:
In the beginning it was very exciting and in the end it was even worse.
(Pretty much wraps up the writing life, doesn’t it? :D)
Why is this important? Because opening lines hook us into reading the second line. And hopefully more. I know when I’m browsing for a book, this is what I do—I read the first sentence. And then the first paragraph. I may read the whole first page, but not likely. If the first sentence and paragraph don’t grab me, I shelve the book and choose another.
How many pages do you give a book before you put it down?
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Thursday, May 10, 2012
Writing a Selling Query or Pitch in Four Easy Steps
This is a recycled post I did last November at The Other Side of the Story
Knowing how to condense the idea of your novel into a two or three paragraph pitch is a skill that you will always need. In fact, it's basically what goes on the back jacket flap.
So, what makes a good query/pitch?
1.Tell us who the story is about.
2. Add the circumstance,
3. the conflict
4. and the hook.
I'll use the query that got me my first agent as an example, which also ended up being the basis for the jacket flap.
In CLOCKWISE (YA, chick lit, 60K), boy watching with her best friend would be enough excitement for fifteen year old Casey Donavan. Who it's about. She doesn't even mind life at the bottom of the Cambridge High social ladder, if only she didn’t have this other much bigger problem. Unscheduled trips to the nineteenth century!(A little more about who it's about. It’s okay to elaborate a little).
When Casey gets talked into going to the Fall Dance, the unthinkable happens--she accidentally takes Nate Mackenzie, the cutest boy in the school, back in time. The circumstance.
Protocol pressures her to tell their 1860 hosts that he is her brother and when Casey finds she has a handsome, wealthy (and unwanted) suitor, something changes in Nate. Are those romantic sparks or is it just ‘brotherly’ protectiveness? When they return to the present things go back to the way they were before: Casey at the bottom of the social flag pole and Nate practically the flag flying from the top.The conflict. (Actually there are a few conflicts listed here, but one is usually enough).
Except this time her heart is broken. Plus, her best friend is mad, her parents are split up, and her little brother gets escorted home by the police. The only thing that could make life worse is if, by some strange twist of fate, she took Nate back to the past again.
Which, of course, she does. The hook.
That alone would suffice as a pitch. In a query you should add a little information about yourself.
I added that I'd had editor requests from a Writers Conference I'd recently attended, my publishing history and two book titles whose readers I thought would enjoy this book.
Thank the agent for his or her time (make sure you address the query to them personally).
Sign it “Sincerely,” with your real (not pen) name.
Let’s look at the jacket flaps of a couple popular books.
Paranormalcy by Kiersten White
Evie’s always thought of herself as a normal teenager Who it’s about despite the fact that she works for the International paranormal Containment Agency, her ex boy friend is a faerie, she’s falling for a shape shifter and she’s the only person who can see through paranormals’glamours.The circumstance.
But Evie’s about to realize that she may very well be at the center of a dark faerie prophecy promising destruction to all paranormal creatures. The conflict.
So much for normal. The hook.
Matched by Ally Condie
(This one doesn’t follow the four point plan and I don’t think it’s as strong as it could be. What do you think?)
In the Society, Official decide. Who you love. Where you work. When you die. Here the circumstance is given before we find out who the story is about.
Cassia has always trusted their choices. Who it’s about, but not a lot of info. It’s barely any price to pay for a long life, the perfect job, the ideal mate. So when her best friend appears on the Matching screen, Cassia knows with complete certainty that he is the one…until she sees another face flash for an instant before the screen fades to black. The conflict Now Cassia is faced with impossible choices: between Xander and Ky, between the only life she’s known and a path no one else has ever dared follow--between perfection and passion. More on the conflict but not a real hook.
The Adoration of Jenna Fox by Mary E. Pearson
Seventeen year old Jena Fox has just awaken from a year-long coma Who it’s about--so she’s been told--and she is still recovering from the terrible accident that caused it. The circumstance. But what happened before that? She’s been given home movies chronicling her entire life, which spark memories to surface. But are the memories really hers? And why won’t anyone in her family talk about the accident? The conflict. Jenna is becoming more curious. But she is also afraid of what she might find out if she ever gets up the courage to ask her questions.
What happened to Jenna Fox? And who is she, really? The hook.
(I think this is the strongest one of the bunch. What do you think?)
I'll critique the first three queries posted in the comments and reveal them on my blog next week.
Knowing how to condense the idea of your novel into a two or three paragraph pitch is a skill that you will always need. In fact, it's basically what goes on the back jacket flap.
So, what makes a good query/pitch?
1.Tell us who the story is about.
2. Add the circumstance,
3. the conflict
4. and the hook.
I'll use the query that got me my first agent as an example, which also ended up being the basis for the jacket flap.
In CLOCKWISE (YA, chick lit, 60K), boy watching with her best friend would be enough excitement for fifteen year old Casey Donavan. Who it's about. She doesn't even mind life at the bottom of the Cambridge High social ladder, if only she didn’t have this other much bigger problem. Unscheduled trips to the nineteenth century!(A little more about who it's about. It’s okay to elaborate a little).
When Casey gets talked into going to the Fall Dance, the unthinkable happens--she accidentally takes Nate Mackenzie, the cutest boy in the school, back in time. The circumstance.
Protocol pressures her to tell their 1860 hosts that he is her brother and when Casey finds she has a handsome, wealthy (and unwanted) suitor, something changes in Nate. Are those romantic sparks or is it just ‘brotherly’ protectiveness? When they return to the present things go back to the way they were before: Casey at the bottom of the social flag pole and Nate practically the flag flying from the top.The conflict. (Actually there are a few conflicts listed here, but one is usually enough).
Except this time her heart is broken. Plus, her best friend is mad, her parents are split up, and her little brother gets escorted home by the police. The only thing that could make life worse is if, by some strange twist of fate, she took Nate back to the past again.
Which, of course, she does. The hook.
That alone would suffice as a pitch. In a query you should add a little information about yourself.
I added that I'd had editor requests from a Writers Conference I'd recently attended, my publishing history and two book titles whose readers I thought would enjoy this book.
Thank the agent for his or her time (make sure you address the query to them personally).
Sign it “Sincerely,” with your real (not pen) name.
Let’s look at the jacket flaps of a couple popular books.
Paranormalcy by Kiersten White
Evie’s always thought of herself as a normal teenager Who it’s about despite the fact that she works for the International paranormal Containment Agency, her ex boy friend is a faerie, she’s falling for a shape shifter and she’s the only person who can see through paranormals’glamours.The circumstance.
But Evie’s about to realize that she may very well be at the center of a dark faerie prophecy promising destruction to all paranormal creatures. The conflict.
So much for normal. The hook.
Matched by Ally Condie
(This one doesn’t follow the four point plan and I don’t think it’s as strong as it could be. What do you think?)
In the Society, Official decide. Who you love. Where you work. When you die. Here the circumstance is given before we find out who the story is about.
Cassia has always trusted their choices. Who it’s about, but not a lot of info. It’s barely any price to pay for a long life, the perfect job, the ideal mate. So when her best friend appears on the Matching screen, Cassia knows with complete certainty that he is the one…until she sees another face flash for an instant before the screen fades to black. The conflict Now Cassia is faced with impossible choices: between Xander and Ky, between the only life she’s known and a path no one else has ever dared follow--between perfection and passion. More on the conflict but not a real hook.
The Adoration of Jenna Fox by Mary E. Pearson
Seventeen year old Jena Fox has just awaken from a year-long coma Who it’s about--so she’s been told--and she is still recovering from the terrible accident that caused it. The circumstance. But what happened before that? She’s been given home movies chronicling her entire life, which spark memories to surface. But are the memories really hers? And why won’t anyone in her family talk about the accident? The conflict. Jenna is becoming more curious. But she is also afraid of what she might find out if she ever gets up the courage to ask her questions.
What happened to Jenna Fox? And who is she, really? The hook.
(I think this is the strongest one of the bunch. What do you think?)
I'll critique the first three queries posted in the comments and reveal them on my blog next week.
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Wednesday, May 9, 2012
FRACTURED by Susan Oloier is on tour!
I'm pleased to be part of author Susan Oloier's book tour for FRACTURED.
When Anna Kincaid has a miscarriage, her world comes crashing to a halt. Grief overwhelms her life and she combats it with prescription medication. Her husband Lloyd does not see the event as tragic. In fact, not ready to be a father, he is relieved at the news. This creates a chasm in their marriage and splits them apart. Both Anna and Lloyd find themselves moving in different directions. Anna finds hope in a young, male colleague named Ben and comfort in her narcotics. Lloyd loses himself in work. Will their marriage survive the miscarriage, or will it always remain fractured?
- Susan Oloier
- Mom, wife, laundry-doer, and published writer. My essays have been published nationally, regionally, and online. I'm an Indie author in the making.
Fractured is now available on Amazon and other sites.
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Monday, May 7, 2012
Laura Paulings A SPY LIKE ME is out!
In celebration of the official
release of A Spy Like Me, Laura Pauling is hosting a three-week
blog series: A Spies, Murder and Mystery Marathon. Woot! Woot!
Authors galore, guest posts
and book giveaways almost every day!
Gemma Halliday,
Cindy M. Hogan, Elizabeth Spann Craig,
Nova Ren Suma, Elisa Ludwig,
and Anne R. Allen....Just to name a few!
And here's why she's
celebrating!
Stripping your date down to
his underwear has never been so dangerous.
After dodging bullets on a
first date, Savvy must sneak, deceive and spy to save her family and friends
and figure out if Malcolm is one of the bad guys before she completely falls
for him.
Head on over to Laura’s blog
for the start of the Spies, Murder and Mystery Marathon. You won’t
want to miss this sizzling series as we head into summer. Stock up on some
great thrilling reads! If you dare…
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